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Friday 17 April 2020

The cheese on the mouse trap

2 comments:

  1. Mery, this writing is wicked! I cant believe you wrote all that in just ten minutes! I am very interested and I wondered what happened after he stole the cheese? did he share it? Your writing was very creative and amazingly detailed. Keep up the great work

    Mr Nua

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    1. Kia ora Mr nua
      i liked how you used the word wicked. The mouse didn't share it because the mouse was greedy and after he stole it he went back to the spy lab to eat it

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