Year 5/6 Camp - Writing 
WALT: write in paragraphs.
Introduction
Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.
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Hi, my name is Mary but people call me Mery and today's writing is about yr 5 & 6 camp.
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Paragraph 1
What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you
sleep? How long is the camp etc... |
The camp is about having fun. Who: yr 5 & 6 , When: last week on Wednesday, Where: pt England field,
Why: to have fun and camp lasts for 3 days. |
Paragraph 2
Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?
E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert
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Food
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Paragraph 3
Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?
E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert
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Pools
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Paragraph 4
Thank you. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders
etc |
Mr Somerville, Mr goodwin and Mr Burt. School
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Conclusion
What did you learn about yourself in camp, why would you recommend that every student do this in
[/.future. |
I learned to have fun.
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Paste your finished and edited writing here
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