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Friday, 20 March 2020

About camp

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing 


WALT: write in paragraphs.


Introduction
Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.
Hi, my name is Mary but people call me Mery and today's writing is about yr 5 & 6 camp.
Paragraph 1
What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you
sleep? How long is the camp etc...
The camp is about having fun. Who: yr 5 & 6 , When: last week on Wednesday, Where: pt England field,
Why: to have fun and camp lasts for 3 days.
Paragraph 2
Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?
E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert
Food
Paragraph 3
Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?
E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert
Pools 
Paragraph 4
Thank you. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders
etc
Mr Somerville, Mr goodwin and Mr Burt. School
Conclusion
What did you learn about yourself in camp, why would you recommend that every student do this in
[/.future.
I learned to have fun.


Paste your finished and edited writing here

The dusty den


On a dark and rainy day, there were two men that are archaeologists and they
decided to explore the dusty den. In the exploring book, they said that no one has
ever survived but they were brave. 

But there was a bad guy that is a treasure hunter and he had two savage hyenas
but nothing can’t stop the archaeologists.

When they got to the dusty den they looked at a little bit of gold and there were
lots of dusty bones and they also saw a humongous skeleton that was broken into
pieces. 

When they got to the dusty den they looked at a little bit of gold and there were
lots of dusty bones and they also saw a humongous skeleton that was broken into
pieces. 

Whoever touches the bones they turn into a statue and then the wind blows at
them and they turn into smoke. 

The archaeologists were a pretty bit scared but when they nearly touched the
bones the bad guy came with the hyenas and he took all the gold and left but
there was one bone that was gold and when the bad guy touched it he turned
into a statue. He turned into smoke.


So the two archaeologists went with two bones and they left with death. What do you think is gonna happen next?


                                      The end


Wednesday, 18 March 2020

The beach


On a sunny day, I woke up and went to the beach with no one. It was like I'm on a private island.

Until I heard something from the mountains and it sounded like a wild beast but I didn't see it properly
because of the mist. When I was relaxing on the rocks I heard something again so I changed into my
mountain gear and packed up for the mountain. When I was climbing the misty mountain I saw a
shadow and it looked like a tiger so I looked closer and it climbed a tree that I have never seen before
so I used my flashlight to see more and it was a… kitten it jumped on me and I decided to keep it.
Its color was light brown. I and my kitten went back to the beach and watched the sunset.

I made my kitten a mermaid costume with sand and we built sandcastles until… two people came up
to me with two wild dogs. I tried to scream but they blocked my mouth and gave two masks to me one
is a small one for my kitten and one is medium-sized. They ran away because my mum came and I left
the beach.

When we got home. My mum told me that those two people had the coronavirus and I was shocked and
went to my room with my kitten. I put my mask on and left the house. We went to the beach again and
watched the sea animals. 
The end

Monday, 9 March 2020

On the weekends

On Saturday I woke up and walked quietly in the kitchen to eat some yummy breakfast. As I walked in the kitchen my mum woke up and heard my footsteps so she went out of the bed and went in the kitchen.

She sawed me waiting in the on the table and she started cooking. My brother smelled breakfast and went out of bed and ran to the dining table.

We quickly ate and changed into our swimming togs because were going to the... Swimming pools! we packed up and waited outside for our Aunty. We waited and waited until... She came! so we dashed into the car and drove to the Glen Innes swimming pools.

We went in and payed money at the counter for all us to be pool and went in the little pools first because the big pools had swimming lessons. We swam and swam and then we finally got to go to the big pools it was much more warmer because the small pool was kinda cold. It was fun until one of my cousins friend came it was nice but at the same time i felt kinda furious because I hate that friend my yr 6 cousin was playing with him. me and my yr 4 cousin decided to have a war so I pushed my self and fighted my cousin and his friend. my cousin cheered for me but my cousin just pushed me to the not deep side and his friend went home. my cousins played with me and we went out of the pools and showered then we went home.

jack o halloween


On a halloween night there was a man that dressed up as a vampire. He stole everyones candy. But let me tell you a secret. He was a werewolf and he was filled with sugar, that is why he steals everyones candy. Until… the full moon showed up and he tried to run away from the light but he tripped over a jack- o - lantern and he was wild until a witch came and she put a spell on him and the jack-o-lantern.

The man shrunk down and the lantern was alive. The jack o lantern was hungry so he decided to eat the
man.The jack o lantern bit the man and he tried to bite him and the man was too strong so the pumpkin
felt scared that the man might break his teeth so the jack o lantern blew hard and the man jumped off. 

The witch was surprised so she became small and the man turned big and the pumpkin was fake again
with a weird face. What do you think is gonna happen next?